Question

9．圖示作文：下列圖片描述的是上周日下午，劉強(qiáng)和趙磊所經(jīng)歷的一件事．請根據(jù)這些圖片寫一篇作文．

要求：
1．話題作文或圈示作文任選其一．
2．要求字跡工整，語法正確．意思連貫，合乎邏輯．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3．詞數(shù)在80-100詞之間．
Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei are good friends．They both like playing soccer very much．Last Sunday，they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon．They were both good at soccer and they played happily．Suddenly，Liu Qiang kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the window of Granny Ma's house and made the window broken．The pieces of the window fell onto the ground everywhere．Liu Qiang and Zhao lei felt very sorry．So they went to granny Ma's house and said sorry to her．
Although they did something wrong，they were still good boys，because they were honest．Everyone should try to be an honest person．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖片講述上周日下午劉強(qiáng)和趙磊所經(jīng)歷的一件事．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．描述圖畫；踢足球，打碎了玻璃，和奶奶道歉
2．我的感想；
 
常用到的重點短語：
decide to do sth 決定做某事
be good at 擅長
make+sth+adj 讓某某怎樣
try to do sth 盡力做某事
【高分句型】
1．Suddenly，Liu Qiang kicked the ball①so hard that it flew to the window of Granny Ma's house and②made the window broken．
①so…that，表示如此…以至于…，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．
②make+sth+adj 讓某某怎樣
2．①Although they did ②something wrong，they were still good boys，③because they were honest．
①although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，不能和but連用．
②形容詞修飾不定代詞，需后置．
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
3．Everyone should try to be an honest person．
try to do sth 盡力做某事

解答 Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei are good friends．They both like playing soccer very much．Last Sunday，they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon．They were both good at soccer and they played happily．Suddenly，Liu Qiang kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the window of Granny Ma's house and made the window broken．【高分句型】The pieces of the window fell onto the ground everywhere．Liu Qiang and Zhao lei felt very sorry．So they went to granny Ma's house and said sorry to her．（描述圖畫）       Although they did something wrong，they were still good boys，because they were honest．【高分句型】Everyone should try to be an honest person．【高分句型】（我的感想）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，本題材料是四幅圖畫．動筆前應(yīng)認(rèn)真看圖，了解圖畫內(nèi)容，展開合理想象．然后根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題．此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題．寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤．只要平時積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)．另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時就會有法可依．