Question

【題目】自開展讀書月活動以來，班級同學發(fā)生了很大的變化，班會課上，班長就同學們的變化發(fā)表了演講。請根據(jù)以下中文提示，以“Changes of my classmates”為題，寫一篇演講稿。

過去	1.花很多時間上網(wǎng)、玩手機游戲2.與家人交流太少 3．……
現(xiàn)在	1.養(yǎng)成了讀書的習慣，每天至少讀書半小時 2.經(jīng)常向老師尋求建議該讀什么書 3.到目前為止，每個人已經(jīng)讀了5本書了 4.增長知識、開闊眼界、獲得快樂
展望	……

要求：

1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2.必須包含所有信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；

3.不得使用真實姓名和校名等;

4.字數(shù)在80字左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Changes of my classmates

My classmates have changed a lot recently. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That's all for my speech. Thank you for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】Changes of my classmates

My classmates have changed a lot recently.

In the past it took them a long time to surf the Internet through mobile phones every day. They seldom talked with their parents. Now it is a good habit for them to read for half an hour every day. Moreover, they often ask their teachers for advice about some books. So far they each have read five books. Therefore, reading not onlybroadens their views but also brings them happiness. They often keep in touch with their parents and friends. At the same time, reading makes them relaxed.

That's all for my speech. Thank you for your listening

【解析】這篇作文要求我們介紹開展讀書活動以來，班里學生們的變化，題目中有一個表格，列舉了學生們發(fā)生的主要變化，寫作時，我們可以根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容，組織語言，串聯(lián)成短文。其中有兩個內(nèi)容需要學生自己來發(fā)揮想象力，補充完整，這需要注意補充的內(nèi)容要與全文內(nèi)容密切相關(guān)，并能上下連貫。短文的時態(tài)應分成兩種情況，介紹過去時，用一般過去時態(tài)，謂語動詞用過去式；現(xiàn)在的變化用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。短文必須包括表格中的所有要點，并且要注意語言和語法的準確性，使用一些連詞或者句型，使短文表達流暢、連貫。