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5．Emily將她的煩惱寫在了博客上并征求大家的建議．假如你是Chen Lin，請了解她的煩惱并寫出你的建議，要求字?jǐn)?shù)在60詞以上，建議的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
建議應(yīng)包括：（1）孩子應(yīng)尊重父母；（2）父母經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富；（3）父母的要求是對你的成長有好處的；（4）多同父母交流溝通．
Possible new words：respect v．& n．尊重；  responsible adj．有責(zé)任感的；
demand v．& n．要求
Here are Emily's problems on the Blog：
My problem is my parents．They never stop going on about（嘮叨） how I should keep my room clean，keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes．They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night!None of my friends have got such terrible parents．What should I do？
Emily，USA
Hi，Emily．I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents．
You should understand and respect them，and do what they ask you to do．They have richer experience and better advice for young people．As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．
Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents
Chen Lin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是對朋友在生活中遇見的煩惱提出建議．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第二人稱及第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
（1）孩子應(yīng)尊重父母（2）父母經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富（3）父母的要求是對你的成長有好處的（4）多同父母交流溝通．
來信的大意是：我的父母從來不停止嘮叨：應(yīng)該保持房間干凈，頭發(fā)干凈和傳整潔的衣服．他們甚至讓我每晚飯后洗碗！我的朋友們沒有一個人的父母如此，我該怎么辦？
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
are helpful for對…有用
such as 例如
keep sb/sth+adj保持某人/某物怎么樣
Learning by doing從做中學(xué)
anyway無論如何
【高分句型】
1． I think①②it's lucky for you to have such good parents．
①省略了that的賓語從句，作為think的賓語．
②it's adj for sb to do sth對某人而言做某事是怎么樣的，it作為形式主語，to do sth做真正主語．
2．①Anyway，②if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．
①anyway無論如何，副詞，作讓步狀語．
②if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時代替一般將來時．

解答 Hi，Emily．I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents【高分句型】You should understand and respect them，and do what they ask you to do．（尊重父母）They have richer experience and better advice for young people．（父母經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富）As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．（父母的要求是對你的成長有好處的）Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．（父母的要求是對你的成長有好處的） Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．【高分句型】（多同父母交流溝通）
Chen Lin

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