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【題目】初中三年，猶如一汪清水，平平淡淡，只是偶爾蕩起一陣陣漣漪，我們?cè)谄届o中走過，留下美好的回憶�；叵脒@三年，我們?cè)谶@美麗的校園里，從同學(xué)、老師那兒收獲了很多，自然你也一定為你的同學(xué)、老師和學(xué)校做過不少有意義的事情。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合個(gè)人經(jīng)歷談?wù)勀愕某踔猩�活�?/span>

要求：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80詞;

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】I will graduate this July. Looking back on my three years of junior high school, I feel rich inside. Not only did I learn much knowledge, but also I made a lot of friends and had a great time.

I still remembered that I helped one of my classmates who was not good at English, especially grammar. So I helped her learn grammar for about one hour every day. At last, she made great progress and she was grateful for me. I felt very happy that I could do something good for others.

Now, I am going to enter senior high school. I will go on studying hard and get along well with my classmates.

【解析】

這篇作文是以初三即將畢業(yè)為情景，通過分析可知，畢業(yè)的時(shí)候，是一個(gè)離別的時(shí)候，這個(gè)時(shí)候?qū)�老師說的應(yīng)該是感謝和祝福，感謝老師的辛勤培育；對(duì)同學(xué)們說的是過去三年在一起的回憶，還有對(duì)未來生活的期盼。所以我們要用正確的英語將這些感情正確的表達(dá)出來，句式表達(dá)要符合英語規(guī)范，語言要準(zhǔn)確。當(dāng)然我們要使用好的句式或者連詞，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。根據(jù)內(nèi)容的需要，這篇短文中應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，注意不同時(shí)態(tài)的變化。