Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Tom，想推薦李磊獲得今年的優(yōu)秀青年獎(jiǎng)（Youth Award）。根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇推薦信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1、他勤奮好學(xué)，成績(jī)優(yōu)異；

2、他擅長(zhǎng)數(shù)學(xué)，幫助同學(xué)們解決各種數(shù)學(xué)問(wèn)題；

3、他樂(lè)于助人，他常常……

4、他也很勇敢。上個(gè)月把一個(gè)老婦人從火中救了出來(lái)，自己大腿卻嚴(yán)重?zé)齻��?/span>

注意：

1、短文必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；

2、第三要點(diǎn)須用1—2句作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)70左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir/Madam，

I would like to recommend Li Lei for this year’s Youth Award.

I think he should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours，

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam，

I’d like to recommend Li Lei for this year’s Youth Award

Li Lei studies very hard and does well in all the subjects. He is good at maths， so he often helps his classmates with all kinds of maths problems. Li Lei is also helpful. He often gives his seat to the old people on the bus. He is very brave. Last month， he saved an old woman from fire and his legs were badly hurt.

I think he should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours，

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容推薦李磊獲得今年的優(yōu)秀青年獎(jiǎng)（Youth Award）。，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括要點(diǎn)提示所有的信息。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，“上個(gè)月把一個(gè)老婦人從火中救了出來(lái)，自己大腿卻嚴(yán)重?zé)齻?/span>”應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)表達(dá)。人稱為第三人稱，特別要注意在一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)中的主謂一致問(wèn)題。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)。文章銜接連貫，包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫作思路清晰；同時(shí)，本文中運(yùn)用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：would like to， be good at， help…with ， look forward to doing等等。