Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是劉宇，今天你們在街上做了一次關(guān)于“最美味的水果”的問卷調(diào)查并繪制了以下圖表。請根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容寫一篇80詞左右的作文，向大家匯報(bào)一下調(diào)查結(jié)果。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Today we did a survey about “Nicest Fruit” on the street. ________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Today we did a survey about “Nicest Fruit” on the street. About 145 people took part in it. 35 people think the apple is the nicest fruit. When it comes to the orange and the banana, the numbers of people fall to 30 and 10. However, about the kiwifruit and the blueberry, the numbers of people are 25 and 40. The last one is the grape. Only five people like it.

Now we can see that the most people like the blueberry but the fewest people like the grape among these people.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)圖表來介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意如果主語是第三人稱單數(shù)的時(shí)候，謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。