Question

2．假如你是Li Ping，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的表格中提供的信息，給你的新朋友Jack寫一封電子郵件，介紹你的業(yè)余愛(ài)好（flying and collecting kites）．
注意：表達(dá)必須體現(xiàn)所提供的全部細(xì)節(jié)信息，并可在此基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：字?jǐn)?shù)為80個(gè)詞左右．

Hobbies	Items	Details
Flying kites	Beginning time	ten years ago
	Flying place	park
Collecting kites	Beginning time	five years ago
	The amount	nearly 50
	Sizes	big，small
	Shapes	animals
	Storing place	my own bedroom，my parents'bedroom

（Answers vary）

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料比較詳細(xì)，且都用英語(yǔ)給出，故只需要將這些材料按照一定的邏輯順序組織成文即可．在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性．結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
高分句型：
①I will try to collect more kites．我會(huì)嘗試收集更多的風(fēng)箏．句子中try to do sth嘗試做某事．
②I hope that everyone has his own hobby and enjoys it like me．我希望每個(gè)人都有自己的愛(ài)好，像我一樣享受它．句子中that引導(dǎo)一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，like me像我一樣．

解答 Dear Jack，（稱呼語(yǔ)）
  Hobbies can bring us pleasure，friendship and knowledge．（引出話題）My hobby is flying and collecting kites．I began to fly kites ten years ago．I often fly kites in the parks．I think that I can do better in it than any other student in my class．Flying kites makes me happy．I am happier when they fly far away．I've been collecting them since five years ago，and I have nearly 50 kites now．Their sizes are big or small．And their shapes are animals．I will try to collect more kites（高分句型）．I store my kites in my own bedroom and my parents'bedroom．（介紹我的兩個(gè)愛(ài)好）
I hope that everyone has his own hobby and enjoys it like me（高分句型）．What's your hobby？Write to tell me soon．（我的祝愿）
                                                                                                                                Yours 
                                                                                                                                    Liping（結(jié)束語(yǔ)）

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