Question

11．In 60to 120words，write about the topic"Meeting a special friend for the first time"．（ 以"與一個(gè)特殊朋友的第一次相見(jiàn)"為題，寫(xiě)一篇60-120個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
The following are for reference only．（以下問(wèn)題僅供參考）
•When and where did you meet the friend for the first time？
•Why do you think the friend is special？
•What made your first meeting so impressive/unforgettable？
•How are you getting along with each other？
Meeting a special friend for the first time
I have made many friends during my middle school life．However，there is one who is the most special to me．We only met once．
All the students were asked to do an experiment in groups at the middle school entrance exam．Peter and I were in the same group．Since I wanted our group to bethe first to finish the experiment，I did every step hurriedly and didn't care what Peter said．Finally，I failed and felt very disappointed．At that moment，Peter encouraged me to stay calm and relax．He showed me how to do the experiment patiently，step by step，we made it at last．We still keep in touch with each other by QQ．Now I will never forget him who is a patient and special friend．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：However，there is one who is the most special to me然而，有一個(gè)朋友對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是最特別的．這是一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是one，在定語(yǔ)從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)，不可以省略．
高分句型二：All the students were asked to do an experiment in groups at the middle school entrance exam所有的學(xué)生都被要求在中學(xué)入學(xué)考試中分組進(jìn)行實(shí)驗(yàn)．這是一個(gè)一般過(guò)去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的句子，其結(jié)構(gòu)是was/were+及物動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞．

解答 Meeting a special friend for the first time
        I have made many friends during my middle school life．However，there is one who is the most special to me．（高分句型一）We only met once．
        All the students were asked to do an experiment in groups at the middle school entrance exam．（高分句型二）（時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)）Peter and I were in the same group．Since I wanted our group to be the first to finish the experiment，I did every step hurriedly and didn't care what Peter said．Finally，I failed and felt very disappointed．At that moment，Peter encouraged me to stay calm and relax．He showed me how to do the experiment patiently，step by step，we made it at last．（特殊之處）We still keep in touch with each other by QQ．Now I will never forget him who is a patient and special friend．（相處的方式及情況）

點(diǎn)評(píng) （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺(jué)得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語(yǔ)，烘托謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．