Question

7．你校就"中學(xué)生業(yè)余生活"進(jìn)行了調(diào)查．其結(jié)果顯示，有很多學(xué)生是典型的"宅童"，他們喜歡"宅"在家里上網(wǎng)或看電視，而不去參加戶外活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你寫一篇報(bào)告，說明這項(xiàng)調(diào)查的結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)這部分學(xué)生行為的看法以及你給他們的建議．

63.5%	待在家里
14%	運(yùn)動(dòng)
8%	學(xué)習(xí)
3%	與朋友聊天
11.5%	當(dāng)志愿者

注意：1詞數(shù)90左右．短文開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2條理清晰，語義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整．
3短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息．
Last week，we did a survey on students'free time activities in my school．
                                                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think this habit is good我認(rèn)為這個(gè)習(xí)慣好．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
Watching TV and surfing on the Internet a lot are not healthy for our eyes．看電視和上網(wǎng)太多對(duì)我們的眼睛不好．
動(dòng)名詞短語做主語，兩個(gè)短語，故謂語動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)．

解答 Last week，we did a survey on students'free time activities in my school．
About 63.5% students stay at home．They like watching TV and surfing on the Internet．And 22% them will exercise on their free time．I think this habit is good．【高分句型一】Some student also will take part in outdoor activities．For example，about 11.5% them do as a volunteer．It is very meaningful for students．A few students，3% them choose hang out when they are free．（調(diào)查結(jié)果）
I think students always stay at home is not good．It will make them face overweight problem．Watching TV and surfing on the Internet a lot are not healthy for our eyes．【高分句型二】We should do exercise more and often take part in some meaningful activities．（看法建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作要抓住要點(diǎn)．要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫，這樣在寫作時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．