Question

【題目】書面表達。（10分）

假設(shè)Becky是你最好的朋友，請根據(jù)下面的信息，寫一篇短文介紹一下Becky。要求:70詞左右。

Becky：14歲,來自美國。 愛好：打籃球和彈鋼琴。 到校時間：早上7:40 。

到校方式：乘公共汽車 。 家規(guī)：父母要求嚴格，放學回家做作業(yè)，飯后洗餐具。

最喜愛的動物：狗，友好又有趣�？催@張照片，她正在和狗一起玩。

My best friend

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My best friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Becky. She is fourteen years old. She is from the United States. She likes playing basketball and playing the piano. She gets to school at 7:40a.m. It takes her about half an hour to take the bus to the school. Her parents are strict with her. She has to go home to do homework after school. After dinner, she has to do the dishes. Her favorite animal is dogs. Because she thinks it is friendly and interesting. Look at this photo, and she is playing with a dog.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友Becky。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如： Her name is…，She is…, It takes sb time to do sth, She has to……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意完整地表達出提綱中所要求的內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹她的年齡，國籍，喜好，學習和生活情況，最后介紹她的一張照片。此處be from, play basketball, play the piano, take the bus, be strict with, do the dishes等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。