Question

書面表達。（共1題，計15分）
新班規(guī): 1. Don't listen to music or have snacks in the classroom;
2. You have to wear trainers in PE classes;
3. Don't stay at school after 5:00pm... 新班規(guī)實施前后，你的活動如下表：

Before the new rules	Listen to music after class, play basketball after school
After the new rules	Feel stressed, have no time for hobbies
Your ideas	… …

你打算給班長李明寫一封信，告訴他：1.你的興趣愛好2.你的煩惱；3.你對新班規(guī)的建議(至少兩點)。
注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，收信人和寫信人的姓名已給出，但不計入詞數(shù)；
2.信中不能出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校，班級和姓名。
Dear Li Ming:
I am writing to you to tell you something about my worries.
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I’ll be very happy if I can hear from you soon.
Zhou Yang

Answer 1

Dear Li Ming
I am writing to you to tell you something about my worries.
I have a lot of hobbies. I like listening to music and playing ball games with my classmates. I spend much time on my study, so I can only listen to music after class and play basketball after school with my classmates.
But you see the new class rules have come out. I feel very stressed and worried now. I can’t find any time for my hobbies. I can do nothing but write to you about my ideas.
I agree that we shouldn’t have snacks in the classroom. We should wear trainers in PE lessons. I think we should be allowed to listen to music after class. We can relax ourselves and then we will focus on our study in class. You should allow us to play basketball after school. If you disagree, how can I find other time to do so?
I will be very happy if I hear from you soon.
Zhou Yang

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信介紹自己興趣，愛好和煩惱，以及自己對新班規(guī)的建議。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應(yīng)先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。