Question

18．初中三年以來，肯定有很多人或許在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助了你；或許在生活上幫助了你．假設(shè)你是Bob，你的網(wǎng)友Helen發(fā)來郵件，希望知道你最感謝的一個人．現(xiàn)在請你給她回郵件，郵件內(nèi)容包括：
1．人物介紹；
2．感謝的理由（你們的真情故事）；
3．…

小詞典
address  v．述說	complain    v．抱怨	publish    v．出版
annoy  v．使惱怒	conveniently  adv．方便的	resident    n．居民
appreciate  v．感激	desire      n．愿望	resource    n．資源
behaviour  n．行為	freedom    n．自由的	seed       n．種子
bloom   v．開花	porch      n．門廊	surface     n．表面

要求：1．必須涵蓋以上要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；
3．詞數(shù)：約110詞．
Dear Helen，
                                                           
Your sincerely
Bob．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
My mother is the person who I should thank most．我媽媽是我最想感謝的人．
who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾person，who作為從句的賓語．
【高分句型二】
But she ①tries to do ②what she can to③make me study at school．她盡力做他能做的讓我在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)．
①try to do sth盡力做某事
②what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為do的賓語．
③make sb do sth 讓某人做某事．

解答 Dear Helen，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
My mother is the person who I should thank most．【高分句型一】She is an English teacher in a middle school．She is of medium height，and wears a pair of glasses．She likes reading and playing ping-pong．She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother．（人物介紹）She is very busy every day．But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school．【高分句型二】When I am ill，she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time．But sometimes when she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor．（感謝的理由）
For my mother，I'll do my best to be a good child．I'll love her forever．（我的打算）
Your sincerely
Bob．

點評 寫作時，應(yīng)盡量選出你有把握的詞，盡量使用短句（簡單句）．如果有的單詞不會寫，有的思想不會用英語表達，你可以設(shè)法繞開，最好找一個同義詞、同義句，或近義詞、詞組短語來代替．