Question

提示：初中生活即將結(jié)束，你的老師陪伴你度過(guò)了三年的校園生活。回顧其中的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給你的某一位老師寫(xiě)一封信，和他（她）說(shuō)說(shuō)心里話。

要點(diǎn)提示：

①你的老師工作努力認(rèn)真、教學(xué)耐心、待人友好等；

②記敘一件老師給予你學(xué)習(xí)和生活上幫助的事；

③表達(dá)你對(duì)老師的情感。

要求：

①語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)，已給出的詞不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

②文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；

③將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡上。寫(xiě)在本試題卷上無(wú)效。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

 Dear my teacher,

     Leaving you－lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.

     Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you’ve always been working hard. I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave.

     Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.

Thank you again for what you've done for us! All the best to you!

                                       Yours,

Mike

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封回信。本題給出的材料要點(diǎn)較為簡(jiǎn)略，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文使用了一些短語(yǔ)及固定句型為文章增色不少。如be strict with對(duì)……要求嚴(yán)格；take care of照顧，照料；get on well with與……相處融洽；because of由于；I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. 我不會(huì)忘記你的課多么有趣和你是多么友好。I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave. 我仍然記得當(dāng)我在考試中失利，你鼓勵(lì)我繼續(xù)努力。當(dāng)我在生活中有麻煩時(shí)，你告訴我要勇敢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。