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9．畢節(jié)市準(zhǔn)備舉辦"美麗畢節(jié) 從我做起"大型英語主題演講比賽，請(qǐng)以"How to make Bijie more beautiful"為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的演講稿，要求內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范．How to make Bijie more beautiful
Bijie is a beautiful city that is famous in China．But something imperfect happens to it at times．So it's important for us to make it more beautiful．
First，I should study hard to improve ourselves．Good education is important for a beautiful city．
Second，I should be a greener person．I must try my best to make our environment cleaner and quieter．I should plant more trees，save water and reduce pollution．
Third，I should be friendly and polite to others．When people are in trouble，I should help them as much as possible．I should obey all kinds of rules and set an example to others．
I believe"nothing is impossible"．If everyone can make a contribution to Bijie，it will be more beautiful in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
So it's important for us to make it more beautiful．
句中使用句式為：it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth．這句話意為：因此，對(duì)我們來說讓它變得更漂亮很重要．
高分句型二：
If everyone can make a contribution to Bijie，it will be more beautiful in the future．
句中"If everyone can make a contribution to Bijie"為條件狀語從句，使用短語有"make a contribution 做貢獻(xiàn)"．這句話意為：如果每個(gè)人可以為畢節(jié)做貢獻(xiàn)，將來它會(huì)更漂亮．

解答 How to make Bijie more beautiful
  Bijie is a beautiful city that is famous in China．But something imperfect happens to it at times．So it's important for us to make it more beautiful．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)明主題）
  First，I should study hard to improve ourselves．Good education is important for a beautiful city．
  Second，I should be a greener person．I must try my best to make our environment cleaner and quieter．I should plant more trees，save water and reduce pollution．
  Third，I should be friendly and polite to others．When people are in trouble，I should help them as much as possible．I should obey all kinds of rules and set an example to others．（列舉我能做的事情）
  I believe"nothing is impossible"．If everyone can make a contribution to Bijie，it will be more beautiful in the future．【高分句型二】（總結(jié)全文）

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