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14．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號^，并在其下面寫出該增加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．沒處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一詞；
2．在答題卡的第六節(jié)的題上答題．
3．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
When I was a baby，my parents often gave me a hug，took me to play on the vegetable garden and took many photo of me，because they cared about my safety and kept me away from any hurt．While I was growing up，they give me more and more"love"，and I thought it began to hurt me．When I was student，they often told me many rules．For example，I wasn't allowed to use me mobile phone．However，I thought I was old enough to do what I wanted to，so I often talked back to them angry．Later，my teacher has several conversations with us．Finally，we came to know that we really loved each other，but the way to get along with each other was not correct．I regretted for treating them like that．They gave me much chances to make my own decisions．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要講述：作者小時(shí)候，父母經(jīng)常給我拍照并且小心照顧我，讓我遠(yuǎn)離傷害．當(dāng)我逐漸長大的時(shí)候，發(fā)現(xiàn)他們給我越來越多的愛，我開始覺得他們在傷害我．當(dāng)我是學(xué)生的時(shí)候，他們經(jīng)常制定給我好多規(guī)則．例如，不允許我使用手機(jī)．然而我認(rèn)為我足夠大的做我想做的事情，因此我經(jīng)常生氣地和他們頂嘴．不久，我的老師已經(jīng)和我們談話好幾次．最后我們開始知道我們真的很愛彼此，但是我們相互溝通的方式不對．我后悔我那樣對待他們．他們給了我很多機(jī)會(huì)做自己的決定．

解答 1．on----in；考查介詞用法，在菜園里，用介詞in．
2．photo----photos；考查名詞用法，拍許多照片，用photo的復(fù)數(shù)形式photos．
3．give---gave；考查動(dòng)詞用法，while引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，前后時(shí)態(tài)要一致，主句要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故用give的過去式gave．
4．a(chǎn)nd----but； 考查連詞的用法，根據(jù)前后語境，他們給了我越來越多的愛，"但是"我認(rèn)為它開始傷害我了．故用連詞but．
5．When I was student--When I was a student； 考查冠詞用法，表示泛指，一個(gè) 使用冠詞"a"．
6．use me mobile phone-----use my mobile phone； 考查代詞用法，根據(jù)句意使用"我的"，名詞前面使用形容詞性物主代詞，故用my．
7．I often talked back to them angry---I often talked back to them angrily； 考查副詞用法，根據(jù)語境，我經(jīng)常"生氣地"和他們頂嘴，修飾動(dòng)詞用副詞，故用angrily．
8．my teacher has several conversations with us-----my teacher had several conversations with us； 考查動(dòng)詞用法，根據(jù)語境，我的老師和我們談話好幾次．與…談話have conversation with…，且陳述的是過去的事情用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故填had．
9．I regretted for treating them like that----I regretted treating them like that； 考查動(dòng)詞用法，regret to do sth．遺憾還沒有做；regret doing sth 后悔做過某事，根據(jù)句意后悔那樣對待他們，故填doing，去掉介詞for．
10．They gave me much chances---They gave me many chances；考查many的用法，chance 機(jī)會(huì)，是可數(shù)名詞，表示"很多"修飾可數(shù)名詞用many，故把much 改為many．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)題，考生注意結(jié)合詞語用法和語境，以及語法知識找出錯(cuò)誤并改正．