Question

【題目】 文段表達 (15分)

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信。信的開頭和 結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計入所完成的回信內(nèi)。所給英文提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的 校名和姓名。

假設(shè)你叫李華，最近和英國朋友Jim通過郵件談?wù)摳髯缘膲粝�，他想了解你的職業(yè)夢想。請根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件。

提示詞語: want to be, reason, think, work hard

To Jim From Li Hua Subject My dream Hi! Jim, I’m glad to hear from you.______________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone has his own dream. I want to be a good doctor. The reason is that some doctors saved my life after I was badly hurt in a traffic accident. I was deeply moved by their medical skills. From then on, to be a doctor in the future has always been my dream.

Everyone can realize his dream. I think the first thing I will do is to remember what my dream is. I won’t let it leave my mind. I will also keep telling myself what I want every day. What’s more, I will never give up. Though there may be difficulties on the road to my dream, I will always feel confident and work hard.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。