Question

【題目】圖示作文：仔細觀察圖片描述，展開合理想象，然后寫一篇短文。

要求：1. 話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。

2. 詞數(shù)：80-100之間。

3. 字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當發(fā)揮。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Sunday morning, Henry told his dog to send some letters for him. It was easy for his dog, because it often helped Henry do that. Then it ran to the post office quickly.

A moment later, the dog came back with a letter in his mouth. Henry was very surprised when he saw it. He looked at the letter carefully, and then he found something was wrong with it. Henry realized he had made a mistake—He was so careless that he forgot to stick a stamp on this letter. Finally he thanked his dog.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文，要求學生們仔細觀察圖片，并展開合理想象，將圖片中的內容用正確的英語表達出來。寫作時應先仔細瀏覽圖片，弄清楚每個圖片想要傳達的信息，并將其串聯(lián)成一個完整的故事。審題可知：短文應該是記敘文，講述一件已經發(fā)生的事情，因此整篇文章應使用一般過去時，注意謂語動詞變?yōu)檫^去式，尤其注意不規(guī)則動詞的變化；人稱應為第三人稱。寫作時應注意：首先內容應符合圖片描述，可以展開合理的想象，但應符合圖片傳達的信息。其次應注意英語句式的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯。應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，選擇適當?shù)木湫汀⒍陶Z和詞匯，可以簡單句結構為主，穿插并列句和復合句，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文章內容連貫、表達流暢。