Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)：

（15分）某中學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次學(xué)生健康狀況調(diào)查問卷活動(dòng)，調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生的健康狀況如下：

1.飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理；

2.體育鍛煉不足；

3.心理壓力大；

針對(duì)現(xiàn)狀，請(qǐng)你寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文，說明如何保持身體健康。

要求：

1. 語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)意連貫；

2. 包含提示中提到的所有信息；

3. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) ；

4. 不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校等；

5. 不少于80詞。

How to stay healthy is a big problem for us. Here is some of my advice.

Answer 1

【答案】

How to stay healthy is a big problem for us. Here is some of my advice. As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly， we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables， but less junk food. Drink more water instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks. Secondly， it's good for us to take more exercise， such as running， walking， ball games and so on. At last， we should learn to relax ourselves. We can listen to some light music， chat with families or friends and have a good sleep. To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇文章主要介紹了某中學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次學(xué)生健康狀況調(diào)查問卷活動(dòng)，發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生的健康狀況。注意時(shí)態(tài)和征求建議的語(yǔ)氣。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，介紹了學(xué)生們的飲食不合理，及他們的體育鍛煉不足，他們壓力大.，這些句子it's good for us to take more exercise， such as running， walking， ball games and so on；we should learn to relax ourselves給文章增色不少。