Question

6．假設(shè)Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的個(gè)人信息，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以"My good friend"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文．
要點(diǎn)提示：

Name	Susan	Age	14	Country	America
Appearance	tall，blue eyes，golden hair
Character	lovely，helpful
Favourite sports	swimming，running
Hobbies	reading，listening to music
Interests	Chinese history and culture

要求：
（1）內(nèi)容包括所提供的信息及要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不必逐條翻譯；
（2）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇圖表作文，要求是假設(shè)Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的個(gè)人信息，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以"My good friend"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文，也就是說(shuō)文章要以第三人稱來(lái)寫，介紹朋友用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可，寫作要點(diǎn)要包括：1．個(gè)人信息（姓名、年齡、國(guó)籍）2．外貌與性格3．愛(ài)好及喜愛(ài)的運(yùn)動(dòng)和學(xué)科．在寫作時(shí)要注意變換句式，切忌一個(gè)句式寫到底，顯得很枯燥，比如表達(dá)喜歡做某事時(shí)，可以用到She likes doing sth．/Her favorite …is …等句式．

解答 My good friend
  I have a good friend．Her name is Susan．She is 14 years old．She's from America．She's a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair．She likes doing sports，especially swimming and running．She enjoys reading books and listening to
music．What's more，she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．So she often reads books about China．She's lovely and friendly．She gets on well with her friends．She's also helpful．She often helps me learn English．With her help，I made much progress in English．I'm lucky to have such a good friend．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇圖表作文，介紹自己的好友，這類文章好寫，但是很容易流入俗套．因此除了保證寫全提供的信息之外，還要注意句式的變換，如表達(dá)喜歡的時(shí)候，可以用She likes …，Her favorite …is …等等．