Question

10．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)文學(xué)非常受青少年歡迎，但良莠不齊，作為青少年，請談?wù)勀銓Υ说目捶ǎ?br />要點(diǎn)：1 越來越多的青少年熱衷于網(wǎng)上閱讀．
2 好書有助于他們忙碌一天后的放松，也向他們打開了一個(gè)全新的世界．
3 但是網(wǎng)上有些書是不健康的，對青少年有害．
4 他們通常花很多時(shí)間在網(wǎng)上閱讀，結(jié)果不能按時(shí)交作業(yè)，課上還常打瞌睡．
5 你建議…（發(fā)揮2-3句）
注意：1）要點(diǎn)完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順、連貫．
2）正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，語法正確，書寫整潔．
3）90詞左右，建議適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2-3句，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Now online books are popular among teenagers．                                         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①M(fèi)ore and more teenagers are crazy about reading online．越來越多的青少年熱衷于網(wǎng)上閱讀．句子中be crazy about doing sth表示熱衷于做某事，后面跟動(dòng)詞的ing形式．
②They usually spend much time on it．他們通常花很多時(shí)間在網(wǎng)上閱讀．句子中spend time on sth表示花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事．

解答 Now online books are very popular among teenagers．（引出話題）More and more teenagers are crazy about reading online（高分句型）．They usually spend much time on it．（高分句型）As a result，they can't hand in their homework on time．They often feel sleepy in class，too．Good books are good for our mind and body．But many books on the Internet are not suitable for teenagers．They will influence our health．（網(wǎng)上閱讀的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)）I advise teenagers should learn how to choose good books to read．They should achieve a balance between their schoolwork and reading online．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評 題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句子要符合英語的語言表達(dá)習(xí)慣，圖表中給出的要點(diǎn)要全部包括在文章中，因?yàn)樽魑挠性~數(shù)的要求，需要考生進(jìn)行必要的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．