Question

假定上周六晚上，你們?nèi)�家在一家飯店就餐。請你根�?jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語寫一篇短文，描述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，并適當(dāng)加以評論。
要點(diǎn)提示：
1.鄰桌年輕人大聲說笑、吸煙;  2.你請他們不要那樣做;  3.他們不聽，反而嘲笑你。
4.你認(rèn)為：①他們在公共場所那樣做是不對的。
②年輕人是泰州的未來，應(yīng)該……（至少兩點(diǎn)） 參考詞匯：公共道德 public morality
要求：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使句子通順、連貫。
2. 詞數(shù)：80~100詞。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant.

Answer 1

One possible version：
Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant. We were enjoying ourselves when something unpleasant happened. A group of young people sitting next to us talked loudly and smoked. It made the restaurant full of noise and smoke. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
What the young people did was wrong. Although I failed to stop them, I was proud of myself. In my opinion, one should keep quiet in public places. What’s more, we should always watch our manners and pay attention to public morality, as young people are the future of Taizhou.

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確描述事情并且表達(dá)自己的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。在描述事情時(shí)應(yīng)采用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)。文章銜接連貫，運(yùn)用了instead, although, in my opinion, what’s more,but等連詞進(jìn)行銜接。同時(shí)，本文中運(yùn)用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:enjoy ourselves, full of, try to do, refuse to do, laugh at, fail to do, be proud of, pay attention to等。