Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（本題滿分20分）

今年年初，你們學(xué)校組織同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)“八禮四儀”，并開展了一個(gè)“爭做文明市民”的活動(dòng)。同學(xué)們在人際交往，社會(huì)公德方面都比以前有了很大進(jìn)步。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的要點(diǎn)，以To be a civilized citizen為題，用寫一篇英語短文，介紹同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在的表現(xiàn)，并談?wù)?/span>你對(duì)這個(gè)活動(dòng)的看法。

表現(xiàn)	人際交往	尊敬他人 誠信友善 樂于助人 禮貌待人
	社會(huì)公德	遵守交規(guī) 愛護(hù)環(huán)境 寬容禮讓 (自擬一點(diǎn))
感受	你對(duì)這個(gè)活動(dòng)的看法（請(qǐng)考生自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）

注意：

1. 表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。

To be a civilized citizen

Our school organized an educational activity called “To be a civilized citizen” at the beginning of the year. All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways.

Answer 1

【答案】

To be a civilized citizen

Our school organized an educational activity called “To be a civilized citizen” at the beginning of the year. All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways.

It’s really nice to see the students being polite now. They know it’s important to respect the old and care for the young. They also realize they should have good manners and be honest. As a result, they are always friendly to others. Moreover, they are willing to help people any time. When they are on the bus, they always give their seats to people in need. They are always patient enough to listen to others about their joy and worries.

Now the students don’t just care about themselves. They tell others it’s very necessary to follow the traffic rules. They also protect the environment. They show great respect to others and treat people politely.

I’m so happy that the students have learnt a lot from this activity!

【解析】

試題分析:

本題要求按所給的提綱，介紹同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在的表現(xiàn)，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)活動(dòng)的看法。要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在的表現(xiàn)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，用第一人稱we進(jìn)行表達(dá)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文第2自然段寫的是提綱1“人際交往”方面的表現(xiàn)，第3自然段寫的是提綱2“社會(huì)公德”方面的表現(xiàn)，第3自然段寫的是作者的感受。條理分明，層次清楚。短文內(nèi)容包括了提綱所給的所有要點(diǎn)，并做了適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。重點(diǎn)突出。文中的：it’s important to…；are willing to；s it’s very necessary to等等句型運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，使本文生動(dòng)。