Question

【題目】Write at least 60 words about the topic “That time, I really felt worried”(請(qǐng)以“那一次，我真的感到很擔(dān)心”為題， 寫一篇不少于 60 個(gè)詞的短文， 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)

在你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，你一定解決過一度令你感到擔(dān)心的事情，請(qǐng)你描述擔(dān)心的事情是什么，為什么擔(dān)心以及最后又如何解決的。

（注意： 文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）

Answer 1

【答案】That time, I really felt worried

When I was in Grade 7, I went to a new school because my family moved to a new town. I was a little shy. So I was worried about how I could get along with my new classmates and teachers. I worried that I can’t get used to teachers’ new ways of teaching. I also worried that I couldn’t make new friends there. On the night before the school started, my mom came to my room, sat on the bed and told me, “There is no need to worry. When you are friendly to people around you, they will be friendly to you. Believe in yourself.” Listening to these words, I had some courage. That day came. When I entered the classroom, I saw many smiling faces. I felt relaxed at once. The teacher were also very kind. I thought I was lucky.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以That time, I really felt worried為題，介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中碰到的一件令自己感到很擔(dān)心的事情。通過審題可知，作文中應(yīng)主要包括以下內(nèi)容，首先介紹一下讓你擔(dān)心的事情是什么；接下來說明原因；最后介紹自己是如何解決的。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)圍繞這三個(gè)部分的內(nèi)容，組織語言，補(bǔ)充更多的細(xì)節(jié)信息，串聯(lián)成文。短文應(yīng)主要使用一般過去時(shí)，第一人稱敘述，注意謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)變?yōu)檫^去式形式，尤其應(yīng)注意不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過去式的變化。表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)的特點(diǎn)以及與漢語在表達(dá)習(xí)慣上的差別，不要寫漢語式的英語。首先句子結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，可以使用較常見的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)；也可使用并列句和復(fù)合句的復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如用and，but，so等并列連詞或者狀語從句、定語從句等復(fù)合句。同時(shí)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。