Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)：請(qǐng)以“my ideal school’’ 為題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

要求：1.語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確得當(dāng)，條理清晰；2.必須包含以上所有要點(diǎn)；3.詞數(shù)：80左右。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 一所混合學(xué)校；每天早上八點(diǎn)半開(kāi)始上課，不需早起；下午三點(diǎn)半放學(xué)，有時(shí)間進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng)；

2. 選科目學(xué)，我希望上電腦課和體育課，喜歡電腦體育；

3. 和以前比作業(yè)更少、進(jìn)行業(yè)余愛(ài)好的時(shí)間更多；每個(gè)月進(jìn)行一次學(xué)校郊游；……

My ideal school

Let me tell you something about my ideal school! ___________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Let me tell you about my ideal school! It is a mixed school. Every morning I don’t need to get up early because we have lessons at 8：30. In the afternoon, school is over at 3 :30, then we can do a lot of after-school activities. At school, we can choose subjects to learn. I hope we can have computer lessons and PE lessons every day because I like computer and sports. We have less homework and have more time for our hobbies than before. Every month, we also go on a school trip. We always have fun. This is my ideal school. I love it very much. What about you?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我理想的學(xué)校。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Let me...；Every morning I don’t need to ...；I hope we can...；This is...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我理想的學(xué)校是一所混合學(xué)校，接下來(lái)介紹學(xué)校的作息時(shí)間，所學(xué)科目，作業(yè)以及活動(dòng)，最后介紹自己喜歡這所理想的學(xué)校。此處tell sb about sth, need to do sth, get up, every day, go on a school trip, have fun，what about等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。