Question

5．Jack是一名九年級的學(xué)生，最近迷上手機(jī)游戲，經(jīng)常玩到深夜，睡眠不足，不能認(rèn)真聽講，導(dǎo)致成績下降．媽媽很生氣，不再讓他使用手機(jī)．假如你是他的朋友Tina，請你寫一封信給他，建議他要合理使用手機(jī)，如查閱資料，記單詞等．同時(shí)，考試在即，要理解父母、老師的心情，要主動(dòng)去溝通，得到他們的原諒和幫助．
要求：
包含所給要點(diǎn)，語言流暢，意思連貫，適當(dāng)拓展；詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：become poor in study； get angry with； communicate with； forgive．
Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you quarreled with your parents about playing mobile phone games．
                                                          ．
Yours，
Tina．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep．你花那么多時(shí)間玩游戲，你忘記了什么時(shí)候睡覺．
so…that 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句中，so…that 意為"如此…以致"．
spend sometime doing sth花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事
句型二：
You felt too sleepy and tired to listen to theteachers in class the next day．你覺得太困了，累了，以至于第二天不能聽老師講課．
too…to…太…而不能…

解答 Dear Jack，
   I am sorry to hear that you quarrelled with your parents about playing mobile phone games．
  You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep．【高分句型一】You felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day．【高分句型二】Because of these，you became poor in your study．（害處）Your mother got angry with you．You felt bad about this．Firstly，I think you should stop      playing games．You can use mobile phone to search for information，and look up newwords．It is a useful tool in your study．Secondly，you need to communicate      with yourparents and teachers．Let them know your problems．They will help you．At the same time，they will forgive you for your mistakes．（建議）
I hope my suggestions are of great value toyou．
Yours，
Tina

點(diǎn)評 試題分析：寫作主要考查學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用英語語言的能力，涉及學(xué)生的詞匯量，正確運(yùn)用單詞的能力，對所學(xué)語法的掌握程度，能否按照英語習(xí)慣正確表達(dá)所要表達(dá)的意思的能力等等．