Question

17．你是學(xué)校英文報(bào)的小記者李華．請(qǐng)給你校初三學(xué)生寫一封公開(kāi)傍，就如何保持考前健康提出建議．主要內(nèi)容如下：
（1）早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；（2）飲食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；
（3）多做體育運(yùn)動(dòng)；（4）你的其它建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；
  2．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分．
Dear students，
As we all know，good health is important for success in the exams，so I'm writing to                                
Best wishes and stay healthy．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文考查體裁為說(shuō)明文，要求寫寫一封公開(kāi)信，就如何保持考前健康提出建議．要點(diǎn)包括：1．早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；2．飲食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；3．多做體育運(yùn)動(dòng)；．你的其它建議．
高分句型：
①Staying up late is bad for our health．熬夜對(duì)我們的健康有害．句子中Staying up late 是動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)，be bad for對(duì)…有害．
②．If we don't feel well，we should go to see the doctor at once．如果我們感覺(jué)不舒服，我們應(yīng)該馬上去看醫(yī)生．．句子中if引導(dǎo)的是條件狀語(yǔ)從句，go to see the doctor 看醫(yī)生；at once立刻，馬上．

解答 Dear students，
As we all know，good health is important for success in the exams，so I'm writing to tell you how to keep healthy．（引起話題） First，we should get enough sleep during the night．We can go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late is bad for our health．（高分句型）Second，we must have the right kinds of food．We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat．We should drink a lot of water．We should have healthy eating habits．Third，we should do more exercise to build up our bodies．Finally，we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day．If we don't feel well，we should go to see the doctor at once．（高分句型）（考前健康的建議）
Best wishes and stay healthy．（衷心祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇提綱提作文，寫作時(shí)要注意提示要點(diǎn)一定寫全．同時(shí)還要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性．寫作時(shí)，要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．