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3．世界上有許多發(fā)明使得我們的生活越來越有趣，電腦就是其中之一．請根據(jù)下面的表格內(nèi)容，介紹電腦的發(fā)展變化及你對未來學(xué)習(xí)電腦的想法．

	時間：1946年                         地點：美國
早期的電腦	1．大�。汉鸵婚g房子差不多． 2．重量：大約30噸． 3．價格：非常昂貴．
現(xiàn)在的電腦	外觀：又小又輕，很容易攜帶． 用途：1．可以學(xué)習(xí)、工作．            2．可以查找大量信息． 3．可以通過電子郵件和親友聯(lián)系．4．可以聽歌、玩游戲來放松． …
展望未來	努力學(xué)習(xí)更多電腦知識．

要求：（1）字?jǐn)?shù)：80-100詞．（2）內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，不要逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】、
I think the computer is the most useful我認(rèn)為電腦是最有用的．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

【高分句型二】
We can also look up much information that we need on the computer我們也可以在電腦上查找我們需要的更多的信息．
that作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾information．

解答 Useful inventions
　　Many inventions have been influencing our daily lives since they were invented．Among them，I think the computer is the most useful．【高分句型一】
　　The first computer was invented in 1946 in the USA．（時間地點）At that time，the computer was almost as big as a house．How amazing!The weight of the computer was about 30 tons．It was much heavier than an elephant．The price of the computer was so high that only a few people could afford one．（早期的電腦）
　　In the past 70 years，the computer has changed a lot．It is small and light．So it's convenient to take it everywhere we go．The computer is widely used in our everyday lives．For example，the computer can be used to work or study．We can also look up much information that we need on the computer．【高分句型二】What's more，we can send emails to our friends or relatives when we miss them．If we are bored or stressed out，the computer can be used as a music player or a game machine．What a useful invention!（現(xiàn)在的電腦）
　　The computer plays an important role in our lives．So I want to learn more about computers so that I can invent my own computer．（展望未來）

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．