Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1題，滿分15分）

最近你的朋友Tom在他的微博上發(fā)了這樣一個帖子：

These days, I feel my school life is very boring. Every day I do the same things—taking lessons, doing exercises and taking exams. Every day I take the same way—classroom, playground and dining hall. Every day the teachers say the same thing to us: Study hard and try to enter a better high school. . . I want to make my school life easier and more colorful. What should I do?

假如你是Jim，請你給Tom回個帖子。根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示，寫出意思連貫，符合邏輯，不少于80詞的短文。請不要寫出你真實(shí)的校名和姓名。內(nèi)容要求：

1. 針對Tom的困惑，先談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?/span>

2. 結(jié)合自己的學(xué)習(xí)生活實(shí)踐為他提幾條合理的建議；

3. 最后送上你的祝愿。

Hi Tom,

How are you? I saw the problem in your weibo. I can understand your feelings very well.

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Love,

Jim

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Hi Tom,

How are you? I saw the problem in your weibo. I can understand your feelings very well.

As junior 3 students, it is true that our life is a little boring. But I also think it’s a kind of experience that we teenagers have to go through. We can do something to make our school life easier and more colorful.

Here are some pieces of advice for you. First, we can do some sports to make us healthy. Second, it’s useful for us to do some reading or listen to some music after school. Last but not least, we can spend some time talking with our teachers, families or friends. I think they will bring us happiness.

I hope my advice will give you some help, and you can enjoy your school life better.

Love,

Jim

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求根據(jù)朋友微博的內(nèi)容，回一個貼，幫助朋友解決成長中的煩惱。根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，短文要從三個方面進(jìn)行寫作：對朋友困惑的看法、合理的建議及對朋友的祝愿。短文要注意語言的選擇及說話的語氣，用恰當(dāng)?shù)那閼B(tài)動詞及句子結(jié)構(gòu)，使人愿意接受建議。短文用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文第一段，首先表示對朋友的感受的同情，語言切入準(zhǔn)確自然，讓人容易接受。第二段說明初中畢業(yè)班的生活的必然性與必要性，為下面提建議打好伏筆。第三段用first, second等等列出系列建議，層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明。最后一段提出希望與祝愿。語言準(zhǔn)確，中心突出。文中用到了定語從句，不定式作狀語，不定式作主語等等結(jié)構(gòu)，使短文顯得更加生動具體。