Question

【題目】 為提升南京城市形象，我市已啟動老小區(qū)出新改造工程。假設(shè)你是 Tim，請根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示，用英文向你的外國筆友 Jack 做簡單的介紹。

Purpose	improve the environment
Changes to peoples life	beautiful buildings, …
Problems	lots of noise, rubbish
Your advice	…

注意：

1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3 詞數(shù) 80 左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing.

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old communities can do what they can do to renovate our communities.

【解析】

這篇書面表達(dá)是描述老社區(qū)改造工程，話題較新。

這是篇材料作文，所給的內(nèi)容要點給的比較零碎，不完整，所以考生需要結(jié)合實際情況補(bǔ)充完整，是文章內(nèi)容充實。在寫作時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。