Question

各地紛紛在中考中全面組織實施初中畢業(yè)生升學體育考試，并且體育成績在學生中考成績中占有的分量。中考體育考試已經(jīng)結束，但是我們體育的鍛煉還應該繼續(xù)。請你以中考體育考試備考經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文。
寫作要點提示：
1）你的中考體育考試發(fā)揮的怎樣？什么做得好、什么還要努力？2）你平時是怎樣鍛煉、克服困難的？3）你的感受和對此的今后打算？
寫作要求：
短文的內(nèi)容應包含所提示的要點。語言要流暢�？蓢�繞提示要點適當增加情節(jié)，以使短文的意思連貫；短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名及地名；短文的詞數(shù)在90詞左右。
參考詞匯：體育中考senior high school entrance examination of P.E. 跳繩rope skipping
軀體前伸Body front

Answer 1

Today I finished my PE test. There are four parts, they are rope skipping, body front, the long jump and the 1000m race. As a boy I had two parts. One is the long jump, and the other is the 1000m race. I did better in the 1000m race. It took me 5 minutes and 20 seconds. But I don’t do well in the long jump. I only jumped 4.5 meters. I love sports. I often play football and basketball in my out-of-class activities. So I think I am pretty fit. This time the PE test is part of the Senior High School entrance test. Most of us are serious about it. I think we can make PE become one part of our life, then we can have  a strong body. We can get good marks too.

試題分析：根據(jù)本試題要求可知本文應該以第一人稱書寫。整篇短文分三部分：①你的中考體育考試發(fā)揮的怎樣？什么做得好、什么還要努力？這一部分主要使用一般過去時態(tài)；②你平時是怎樣鍛煉、克服困難的？這一部分主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時；③你的感受和對此的今后打算？這一部分主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。在寫作中要用準確的語言表達所給每個要點，不得遺漏任何一個。也可圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮，以使短文的意思連貫。
【亮點說明】本文使用了一些短語如do well in及一些復合句如：So I think I am pretty fit.及I think we can make PE become one part of our life,，這些都為文章增色不少。