Question

學校的“English Center”是同學們練習英語的場所。這里的“Teenager Hotline”每天都能收到不少同學的咨詢電話。請你根據(jù)當時熱線咨詢員Mary對Lucy同學所咨詢問題的電話記錄和對她提出的建議進行整理，以“Make home a happier place to be”為題寫一篇英語小短文向《TIMES》“作品秀”欄目投稿。（字數(shù)100左右）

Problem	Advice
I can’t get on well with my parents. When I want to dress in a modern way, they don't like me wearing a mini-skirt. When I am making phone calls to friends, they ask if I’m speaking to a boy or a girl. Could you tell me what I shall do?	j Talk to them about your school life and your plans for the future. k Tell them your needs and find out what their needs are. l Do some housework you can. They will feel that you are no longer a small child.

Answer 1

Maybe you think your parents don’t understand you. They stop you from dressing in a modern way. They mind who you’re calling. You seem not so close to them as you used to be. How can you get on well with them? Here are some ideas:
1. Talk to them about your school life and your plans for the future.
2. Tell them your needs and find out what their needs are.
3. Do some housework you can. They will feel that you are no longer a small child.
If you follow these steps, slowly, you will break down the walls between you and them. Make home a happier place to be.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要先認真閱讀材料，然后圍繞材料適當發(fā)揮，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。另外，在描述時，應(yīng)該注意人稱的變化。
點評：在寫書面表達時首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意動詞的應(yīng)用，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。