Question

【題目】書面表達

請以“My friend”為題，根據(jù)下面的表格提示，介紹一下你的朋友。

Name	Kitty
Profile	12 years old, come from England live in Beijing , in Grade7
Appearance	long hair, tall and slim, wear glasses
Hobbies	like reading, sports, music, be good at swimming
School life	walk to school, favourite subject is．．．

要求：1．文章須包括所有要點，并進行適度拓展。

2．詞數(shù)70詞左右。

3．注意標點和大小寫。

My friend

Answer 1

【答案】

My friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Kitty. She is 12 years old. She comes from England. She lives in Beijing with her parents. She is in Grade 7. Kitty is a tall and slim girl. She has long golden hair. She often wears a pair of glasses. She has many hobbies. She likes reading, doing sports, listening to music, especially swimming. She is very good at it. Every day she walks to school, her favorite subject is Chinese.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的好朋友吉蒂。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Her name is…，She is....，And she has....，She can....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要介紹我們經(jīng)�；ハ鄮椭�。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友叫凱特，接下來介紹凱特的長相和喜好，最后指出我們互相幫助。此處come from, like doing sth, live in, a lot of，be good at等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。