Question

9．假如你叫Jane，這個暑假你們?nèi)�家�?zhǔn)備出去旅游，就下列內(nèi)容給旅行社的經(jīng)理寫一封信．
注意：1、字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
       2、不得在文中透露自己的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱，否則不予評分．

Dear manager，
My whole family want to
                                                     
Yours，
Jane．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①we want to book a hotel which is not expensive．我們想預(yù)定一個不是很貴的旅館．want to do sth想做某事，a hotel which is not expensive，這里 which is not expensive作定語修飾hotel，構(gòu)成一個定語從句，這里表示物用which來引導(dǎo)．
②We are looking forward to this journey．我們期待著這次旅行．look forward to期待，后面跟動詞ing形式．

解答 Dear manager，
My whole family want to have a journey to Dalian during the summer holiday．It will begin on July 10th，and the journey will last for ten days．We will go there by plane．Could you help me book seven air tickets？Then，we want to book a hotel which is not expensive（高分句型）．We need three rooms for seven people，and what's the most important，the hotel should not be far from the ocean．（介紹旅游的時間、乘坐的交通工具以及住宿要求）
We will take a walk along the beach in the morning，and we will go swimming and playing volleyball on the beach after lunch．Besides，my father and I will go surfing and diving into the water in the afternoon．It will be great fun．In the evening，we will eat many different kinds of seafood．It will be an exciting vacation and we will have a good time．（介紹旅游的一些計劃）
We are looking forward to this journey（高分句型）．Thank you for your helping us．（期待及感謝）
                                                       Yours，
                                                       Jane

點評 這是一篇圖表作文，所給材料比較詳細(xì)，且都用英語給出，故只需要將這些材料按照一定的邏輯順序組織成文即可．在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性．