Question

13．根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫，符合邏輯，不少于50詞的回信．信的開頭和結尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計入所要完成的回信內．所給英文提示詞語僅供選用，請不要寫出你的校名和姓名．假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom 上周剛過完生日．他想知道你經常和誰一起過生日，怎么過的，你收到的最喜歡的禮物是什么，以及你喜歡它的原因．請你根據(jù)他的問題回復郵件．
提示詞語：cake，noodles，sing songs，make a wish，get presents
．Who do you often celebrate your birthday with？Your parents？Your friends？Or…？
．What do you usually do on your birthday？
．What is your favorite present？Why do you like it？

To       Tom
From    Li Hua
Subject  Birthday
Hi!Tom，
I'm glad that you had a nice birthday party last week．
                                                     
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It is ①such a useful book that I can learn ②not only  confidence but also patience它是如此有用的一本書我不僅能學會自信和而且還能學會有耐心．
①such…that從句：如此…以至于，that引導的結果狀語從句．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…
【高分句型二】
If so，why not try to make it colorful and meaningful？如果那樣，為什么不盡力讓它多彩有意義呢？
①why not do sth 為什么不做某事？
②make+sth+adj讓…怎樣．

解答 Hi!Tom，
I'm glad that you had a nice birthday party last week．I always look forward to my  birthday every year because it means a lot to me．And I usually spend the birthday with my close friends．
On my birthday，we are used to holding a party where we sing and dance together．（經常和誰一起過生日）In order to make every birthday unforgettable．We often bake cakes by ourselves．What's more，it is very  interesting for us to paly various games such as playing cards，playing computer games，and watching videos．（怎么過的）
The most exciting moment is receiving gifts given by my friends．My favorite present is a book about how to make progress from Lucy．（最喜歡的禮物是什么）It is such a useful book that I can learn not only  confidence but also patience．【高分句型一】It is meaningful both for my study and life．（原因）Birthday plays an important part in our daily life．If so，why not try to make it colorful and meaningful？【高分句型二】
Yours，
LiHua

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