Question

6．可持續(xù)發(fā)展（sustainable development）已成為全球共識，如何實行可持續(xù)發(fā)展是擺在世人
面前的重大問題．請根據(jù)下面表格所提供的內(nèi)容陳述我國的現(xiàn)狀并談談你的看法．

目前的狀況	1．自然資源正在減少；2．環(huán)境問題日趨嚴峻，2016年北京霧霾天（hazy days）持續(xù)半年； 3．人們不重視保護環(huán)境；
已采取的措施	1．國家制定了一些法律； 2．對民眾進行教育； 3．與其他國家緊密合作；
你的看法	…

注意：
1．不要逐條翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮．
2．詞數(shù)：90左右．
3．文章的開頭部分以給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
4．霧霾天：hazy day
The idea of sustainable development has been accepted by the world．How to keep sustainable development is a big problem facing our planet．
The present situation in our country is worrying．                                 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 To our great joy，many countries have taken action．令我們高興的是，許多國家已采取行動．本句是現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，表示已經(jīng)…．
高分句型二
On the one hand，they have made relevant laws and regulations and put large amounts of money to the environmental protection．On the other hand，popularized educational as well as international cooperation is being carried out．一方面，他們制定了相關的法律法規(guī)，投入了大量的資金用于環(huán)境保護，另一方面也進行了普及教育和國際合作．on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…，另一方面…

解答 The idea of sustainable development has been accepted by the world．How to keep sustainable development is a big problem facing our planet．
The present situation is worrying．First，natural resources are becoming less than before．Second，as some people are not aware of the importance of the environmental protection，the problems with it remain extremely serious to some degree．The gap between the rich and the poor has the tendency to become wider and wider．【要點一，目前的狀況】
To our great joy，many countries have taken action【高分句型一，注意現(xiàn)在完成的使用】．On the one hand，they have made relevant laws and regulations and put large amounts of money to the environmental protection．On the other hand，popularized educational as well as international cooperation is being carried out【高分句型二，on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…，另一方面…】．【要點二，已采取的措施】
As for myself，I should take the responsibility to devote myself to sustainable development，or our future and the lives of our children and our grandchildren will be in danger．【要點三，你的看法】

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