Question

【題目】作文

你有幾個好朋友？他們和你有什么共同點和不同點？假如今天外教課討論的話題是好朋友，請你根據(jù)以下提示完成短文，在課堂上向大家介紹你的兩個好朋友。

提示：1 The names of your friends 2 In which ways you are different or similar

3. Funny things when you get together .

要求：

語句通順，邏輯連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.不少于60詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

I have two good friends .They are _____________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have two good friends.They are Wang Wei and Li Ming. In some ways we are the same. We all like sports， we often play basketball together after school. We also like reading and we usually go to the library on weekends. But in some ways we are different. Wang Wei is taller and more outgoing than me. He likes going to the movies， but I like playing computer games at home. Li Ming likes watching game shows because he thinks they are interesting. But I don’t like to watch them. I think they are meaningless.

【解析】

試題分析：這是個給材料作文。提示中已經(jīng)給出了作文的寫作要點。在寫作時，注意將要點理清，不要遺漏。在整理文章的結(jié)構(gòu)后，用正確的語言把意思表述清楚。文章可使用一般現(xiàn)在時，并且注意主謂一致。句子之間可適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂眠B詞，使文章邏輯更緊密。

寫作亮點：本文緊扣材料，要點完整，表達清晰流暢。文中用到了很多短語，如：in some ways 一些方面；both of us 兩個都；on weekends 在周末；like watching TV喜歡看電視；等等。文中還用到了形容詞的比較級和最高級，如best， taller， more outgoing等。此外，句子之間用了一些連詞，使邏輯更緊密，如but，and， because等。