Question

【題目】動物是人類的朋友，可是由于人類環(huán)保意識不夠，很多動物正處于瀕臨滅絕的危險境地。請根據(jù)下面表格的提示，介紹一下鯨魚以及人類怎樣保護它們。

注意：文章內(nèi)容要包括表格中的提示，可適當(dāng)拓展,不少于80詞,字跡工整，具有可讀性（15分）

What do they look like?

Where do they live?

What do they eat?

What can they do?

Why do some of them have to be protected?

How can we protect them?

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Answer 1

【答案】Whale are huge animals. They live in the sea and eat small fish and other sea life. One

interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of water. Some kinds of whales are in danger because humans catch them for meat, fat ,and oil, and use whale parts to make candles and soap. Whales are also in danger from water pollution. We should protect whales by making rules on whale protection and by not putting rubbish into the sea. I think people should learn more about whales. .I sincerely hope that we can make our effort to save them!

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“保護動物”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫出鯨的外形、居住環(huán)境、生活習(xí)性等，最后要說明保護鯨的原因及措施。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中kinds of，be in danger, jump high out of, put...into..., learn about, make one’s effort 等詞組的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語從句、表語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。