Question

14．下面是《小艾，爸爸特別特別想你》這本書的兩幅插圖．圖中描繪了父親陪伴小艾成 長的童年片段．父親快到了，請結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，以"爸爸，我想對你說…"開頭，寫一 篇英語短文，以表達(dá)對父親的愛與感激之情．
要求：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名與校名；
2．語句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)：80詞左右．短文開頭部分己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Dad，I want to say to you．In the past few years，you have done a lot for me．We spent much happy time together．With your great care，I grow healthily and happily．I remember when I was ill，you took me to the hospital immediately and took good care of me without a rest during the whole night．I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me．I remember when I got good grades，you were always smiling…But now，you're getting older and older．So I want to say：Please have a good rest and relax．Thank you for your love．I love you forever．．

Answer 1

分析 本題主要是一篇圖畫作文．是一篇表達(dá)對父親的愛與感激之情的作文．首先要弄清楚圖畫提供的信息，然后適當(dāng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力和創(chuàng)造力，來完成這篇文章．
1．人稱：題目可知，寫作時用第一人稱．
2．時態(tài)：回憶往事，一般過去時態(tài)為主；現(xiàn)在想要說的話，以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．
3．內(nèi)容要點：回憶往事（根據(jù)圖畫提示，看適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．）；感恩父愛．
4．主要短語：
take care of 關(guān)心，愛護(hù)；
take sb to+地點，帶某人去某地；
get good grades 取得好成績；
have a good rest 好好休息；
高分句型：
1．I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me．我記得您經(jīng)常帶我到有趣的地方，給我買美味的食物．
這是一個含有賓語從句的復(fù)合句．
主句：I remember；賓語從句：you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me．
2．You're getting older and older．
您越來年紀(jì)越大了．
同一詞的比較級，用and連接，表示越來越…
例如：hotter and hotter 越來越熱．

解答 參考范文：
Dad，I want to say to you．（開篇點題）
   In the past few years，you have done a lot for me．We spent much happy time together．With your great care，I grow healthily and happily．I remember when I was ill，you took me to the hospital immediately and took good care of me without a rest during the whole night．【高分句型一】I remember you often took me somewhere interesting and bought the delicious food for me．I remember when I got good grades，you were always smiling…．（回憶往事）
【高分句型二】But now，you're getting older and older．So I want to say：Please have a good rest and relax．Thank you for your love．I love you forever．（感恩父愛）

點評 本題主要考查圖畫作文．寫此類題目的作文，首先審題：要讀懂畫面內(nèi)容和所表達(dá)的含義，抓住要點，注意文體，以及寫作的人稱和時態(tài)．然后讀圖列提綱：抓住文章的中心，根據(jù)圖畫信息，列出提綱．然后根據(jù)內(nèi)容，考慮所要選用的單詞，短語，句型．最后再修改，潤色全文．