Question

【題目】假如你叫張明，你的外國朋友John發(fā)來郵件，請你介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示及要求給他寫一封80-100詞的回信。

參考詞匯：pray for祈求；harvest豐收

要求：

1.描述節(jié)日1和節(jié)日2，并自主選擇節(jié)日3進行介紹，包括節(jié)日名稱、時間、美食、活動方式及意義等；

2.語言通順，要點齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

4.文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。

Dear John,

Glad to receive your email. You asked me about festivals in China. Let me introduce some important ones to you.

First of all, I want to introduce the Lantern Festival. It comes in January or February.__________________

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Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours.

Zhang Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

Glad to receive your email. You asked me about festivals in China. Let me introduce some important ones to you.

First of all, I want to introduce the Lantern Festival. It comes in January or February. On that day, we eat yuanxiau, go to watch lantern shows and dragon dances to pray for health and happiness for the whole year.

The Mid-Autumn Festival is in the middle of autumn. It is a time for the family to get together and celebrate harvest. At night，the whole family eat delicious mooncakes and tell the story of Chang’e while watching the big bright moon.

The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese. It’s the beginning of a new year. We usually eat dumplings, meat and some other nice food. To welcome the new year, we do some cleaning，buy new clothes, set off fireworks and visit our relatives. Everyone, young or old, has a happy smile on their face.

Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Zhang Ming

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，內(nèi)容我們很熟悉，講述過節(jié)的情景�？忌�首先要認真閱讀表格內(nèi)容提示，把提示內(nèi)容要點寫清；注意題目要求：1.描述節(jié)日1和節(jié)日2，并自主選擇節(jié)日3進行介紹，包括節(jié)日名稱、時間、美食、活動方式及意義等；2.語言通順，要點齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；4.文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。5. 80-100詞。可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，文中內(nèi)容要連貫。要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，最好使用我們熟悉和背過的句型，盡量不要使用復(fù)雜的從句，減少語法錯誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯誤。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。內(nèi)容要點完整、應(yīng)用詞匯靈活準(zhǔn)確，句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，上下文連貫。內(nèi)容覆蓋所有要點；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，注意了連詞和時態(tài)的使用，沒有語言錯誤。無拼寫錯誤，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。