Question

15．在八年級(jí)即將結(jié)束之際，八（3）班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)，要求同學(xué)們談?wù)勔荒陙?lái)自己的收獲與變化．請(qǐng)為Simon準(zhǔn)備一份 80字左右的演講稿 （開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），具體內(nèi)容如下，省略號(hào)部分作適當(dāng)拓展．

	過(guò)去	現(xiàn)在
學(xué)習(xí)	不認(rèn)真．	上課認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講．
業(yè)余生活	大部分業(yè)余時(shí)間聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，看電視，上網(wǎng)玩游戲．	在老師的幫助下，閱讀，鍛煉．
愛(ài)心	不關(guān)心他人，零用錢(qián)用來(lái)…	零用錢(qián)捐給了貧困地區(qū)的孩子們．
展望未來(lái)	九年級(jí)…

Hello，everyone．I'm Simon．Back to the life in the last year，I think I have changed a lot and made great progress （進(jìn)步） in some ways．
First，I used to be careless with my study．But now I listen carefully in class．
Second，I spent most of my free time listening to music，watching TV and playing computer games．Luckily，with my teachers'help，I try to spend my free time reading and doing exercise．
Third，in the past I always spent my pocket money on things like snacks and CDs．But now I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas．I want to give them a helping hand．
Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  I think I have changed a lot and made great progress （進(jìn)步） in some ways．我想我已經(jīng)改變了很多，在某些方面取得了很大的進(jìn)步．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I think是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．
  高分句型二
I spent most of my free time listening to music我大部分空閑時(shí)間都在聽(tīng)音樂(lè)．spend …doing sth．花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事．

解答 Hello，everyone．I'm Simon．Back to the life in the last year，I think I have changed a lot and made great progress （進(jìn)步） in some ways．【高分句型一，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】
First，I used to be careless with my study．But now I listen carefully in class．【要點(diǎn)一，學(xué)習(xí)情況】
Second，I spent most of my free time listening to music【高分句型二，注意spend的使用】，watching TV and playing computer games．Luckily，with my teachers'help，I try to spend my free time reading and doing exercise．【要點(diǎn)二，業(yè)余生活情況】
Third，in the past I always spent my pocket money on things like snacks and CDs．But now I donate my pocket money to the children in poor areas．I want to give them a helping hand．【要點(diǎn)三，愛(ài)心】
I'm sure I can be better and better in Grade 9．【要點(diǎn)四，展望未來(lái)】
Thanks for your listening!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，句子要通順連貫，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．