Question

【題目】同學(xué)們，你們從小到大一定度過了許多難忘的節(jié)日，比如Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day, Children’s Day, National Day等等，請(qǐng)以“An Unforgettable Festival”（一個(gè)難忘的節(jié)日）為題目寫一篇小短文。

提示：1.What was it?

2.When was it?

3.Who did you spend it with?

4.How did you spend it?

5.What special food did you eat?

6.Will you remember it for long? Why?

7. ... ...

要求：1.書寫工整規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用正確。

2.段落清晰，時(shí)態(tài)使用正確。

3.詞數(shù)在90詞左右。

An Unforgettable Festival

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Answer 1

【答案】

There are many festivals in China. We always have fun when we spend them. However, I never forget the last Mid-autumn Festival. Mid-autumn Festival is a popular and important lunar harvest festival celebrated by Chinese people. The festival is held on the 15thday of the eighth month in the Chinese calendar.

On that day, I had a big dinner with my family. After dinner, we admired the full moon which was round and bright. At the same time, we ate the delicious mooncakes. How happy we felt! Then my grandfather told us what the life used to be. They didn’t have enough food and clothes. Their life was so hard that some people died of hunger. What my grandfather said has a great influence on me. I get to value the happy life and food. I don’t waste any food any more.

I will never forget the mid-autumn festival because it always makes me thinking of my grandfather’s words.

【解析】

試題分析：本文內(nèi)容要求你寫記敘文。本文應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)敘事為主。靈活采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)： 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如: at the same time, admire the full moon, die of, think of等；however, after dinner, then等詞匯的恰當(dāng)使用, 使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性、更富有條理；句子結(jié)構(gòu)豐富，語言流暢，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。