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6．假如你在第一中學(xué)讀書．你校準(zhǔn)備在"五一"節(jié)邀請the Beatles樂隊(duì)到你學(xué)校舉行音樂晚會，歡度"五一"節(jié)．請你以學(xué)校的名義寫一個英語海報，告知全校師生．內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1、時間：五月一日晚上八點(diǎn)開始；
2、地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校音樂廳；
3、對the Beatles樂隊(duì)略為介紹；
4、座位有限，請事先定位，聯(lián)系電話：7380540．
要求：根據(jù)中文提示，要求語句通順，書寫規(guī)范．中文提示要點(diǎn)不要逐條翻譯．字?jǐn)?shù)在80左右，開頭結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
NOTICE
Dear classmates，The Beatles is invited to have a music party in our school music hall on May 1^st
The Beatles from UK is very popuplar in the worlD．It has successfully made several pop songs （such as Love Me Do，Number one hti，andPlease Please Me ） which Chinese students are very interested in．There are no engouh seats for all the teachers and students，so please book your seat ahead．Our telephone is 7380540．The party begins at eight in the evening．Remember to come in time!
No．One Middle School．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇列提綱的一篇海報，要注意海報的格式．內(nèi)容是學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備在"五一"節(jié)邀請the Beatles樂隊(duì)舉行音樂晚會，歡度"五一"節(jié)．通知學(xué)生們時間地點(diǎn)，來參加音樂會．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．

寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1、時間：五月一日晚上八點(diǎn)開始；
2、地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校音樂廳；
3、對the Beatles樂隊(duì)略為介紹；
4、座位有限，請事先定位，聯(lián)系電話：7380540

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
have a party舉行聚會
be interested in 對…感興趣
book…ahead提前預(yù)定…
in time及時
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
高分句型：
The Beatles is invited to have a music party in our school music hall on May 1^st．
句中is invited 是被動語態(tài)，為了突出主語The Beatles．
It has successfully made several pop songs （①such as Love Me Do，Number one hti，andPlease Please Me ）②which Chinese students are very interested in．
①括號中列舉，such as 例如…
②定語從句的運(yùn)用，修飾先行詞pop songs．

解答 CONCERT NOTICE
    The Beatles is invited to have a music party in our school music hall on May 1^st．（時間，地點(diǎn)）（高分句型）
The Beatles from UK is very popuplar in the world．It has successfully made several pop songs （such as Love Me Do，Number one hti，andPlease Please Me ） which Chinese students are very interested in．（樂隊(duì)介紹）（高分句型）There are no engouh seats for all the teachers and students，so please book your seat ahead．（事先定位）Our telephone is 7380540．（電話）The party begins at eight in the evening．Remember to come in time!
No．One Middle School

點(diǎn)評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，注意海報的格式．意命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．