Question

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化�！熬W(wǎng)購(gòu)” 成為一種時(shí)尚，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示， 寫一篇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。

優(yōu)點(diǎn) (advantage)	1.不需要出門；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁擠、勞累
	2.價(jià)格通常比較便宜
	3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多
缺點(diǎn) (disadvantage)	1.只看到圖片， 看不到商品本身
	2.容易購(gòu)買大量不太需要的東西， 造成浪費(fèi)
你的觀點(diǎn)	……

注意：1）所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面；
2）文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱；
3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出， 不計(jì)入總數(shù)
提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購(gòu)shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth.; 商品 goods; 導(dǎo)致 cause
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.
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Answer 1

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。要求中只給出了要點(diǎn)，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。