Question

【題目】按要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)60-80詞.（共15分）

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Answer 1

【答案】

Today smoking is a widespread habit all over the world. Not only the old, the youth, but also middle school students have been engaged in smoking. Many of them think that smoking is a smart symbol.

However, smoking is harmful to one's health. It contributes a lot of lung cancer, from which many people have died in the past years. It can also cause many other diseases. In a word, if you smoke, you do have a much greater chance of losing your health. Furthermore, scientific research shows that smoking is not only harmful to smokers themselves, but also a threat to public health, especially to women and children. Therefore, many countries have made laws forbidding smokers to smoke in public places such as cinemas, stations, hospitals, and so on. Give up smoking! If you don't smoke, don't start. Give up smoking for the sake of your health, for the sake of your family, and for the sake of the whole world.

【解析】

試題分析：這是篇命題作文，主要談吸煙的危害性，然后勸人們戒煙。題目對寫作內(nèi)容沒有做明確的限定，在寫作前，一定要理清思路，想好寫作要點，列出提綱，例如吸煙給人們帶來某些危害，各種危害之間可以用序數(shù)詞或者其它的連接詞有序地組織成文。最后可以呼吁大家來戒煙。

寫作亮點： 這是篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，文章結(jié)構(gòu)非常清楚，首先講述了抽煙的普遍性，接著談?wù)摿似湮：π�，最后呼吁大家戒煙。文章中用了很多的連詞，使表達(dá)非常的流暢，例如However然而，also也，In a word總而言之，F(xiàn)urthermore除此之外，Therefore所以等。文章中也使用了很多長難句，如. It contributes a lot of lung cancer, from which many people have died in the past years它可以導(dǎo)致肺癌，在過去的很多年里很多人就死于這個疾病。scientific research shows that smoking is not only harmful to smokers themselves, but also a threat to public health, especially to women and children.科學(xué)家研究表明抽煙不只是對抽煙者有害，也是對公共健康的一個威脅，尤其是對婦女和兒童。