Question

【題目】書面表達。

作為一名七年級學生，請你結合實際情況，并根據(jù)下面的問題提示，寫一篇60詞左右的英語短文，可適當發(fā)揮。文章開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。

1. What subjects do you have this term?

2. What’s your favorite subject?

3. Why do you like it?

4. Who is your teacher and how is his / her class?

5. When do you have it?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone. I am Jack. I am in Class 2, Grade 7. I’d like to tell you my favorite subject at school. I learn many subjects, such as Chinese, English, maths, history and so on. My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is very interesting. I can learn more about different cultures. Also, I can make many friends. My English teacher is Miss Green. She is very kind to us. Her class is also interesting and lively. We have English class on Monday, Wednesday and Friday.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)題目中的提示寫一寫自己最喜歡的科目。我們在短文中需要說明自己最喜歡的科目是什么、為什么喜歡它、你的老師是誰、他的課怎么樣以及你什么時候上這門課程。通過分析可知，這篇短文我們應該使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱來寫。這個話題是學生們比較熟悉的，我們的學習中涉及到很多科目，如語文、數(shù)學、英語等，我們可以從中選擇一門科目，說明喜歡它的原因。我們可以根據(jù)這些問題的提示，將這里內容用正確的英語表達出來。分清主次，還要注意表達的先后順序，注意上下句的銜接，使用更多的連詞和短語，是文意表達流暢、完整。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，短文中作者告訴了我們自己最喜歡的科目，以及喜歡它的原因。整篇短文的內容非常豐富，意思也很完整，層次也很分明。首先作者先點明自己在學校里都學習哪些科目，I learn many subjects, such as Chinese, English, maths, history and so on，這里作者使用了表示舉例的短語such as以及短語and so on；接下來作者說明了自己最喜歡的科目是英語以及喜歡它的原因，My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is very interesting. I can learn more about different cultures. Also, I can make many friends.這是文章的主體，所以語句比較多。最后作者提到了自己的英語老師和上英語課的時間，My English teacher is Miss Green. She is very kind to us. Her class is also interesting and lively。