Question

10．請根據(jù)下面中文提示以為題寫一篇60詞左右的短文，介紹鄭希的一段經(jīng)歷．
假你有個好朋友，名字叫鄭希，他上個月生病了．因為他過去飲食習慣不好，不吃早飯，愛吃一些垃圾食品，而且不愛運動．現(xiàn)在他過著健康而快樂的生活，喜歡吃蔬菜和水果，也經(jīng)常運動，還參加了學�；@球隊．
參考詞匯：in the past，junk food （垃圾食品），outdoor activities．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He was ill last month because he had an unhealthy eating habit in the past他上個月生病了．因為他過去飲食習慣不好
because引導的原因狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
He thinks①②it's important to be healthy．
①think后是省略that的賓語從句．
②it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 I have a best friend，Zhengxi．He was ill last month because he had an unhealthy eating habit in the past．【高分句型一】He didn't have breakfast，and he liked eating junk food．He didn't take outdoor activities．（過去）But now he is more healthy and happier．He likes fruit and vegetables．He usually plays sports and is a member of school basketball team．（現(xiàn)在）He thinks it's important to be healthy．

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