Question

【題目】Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.(以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）

當昨日重現(xiàn)之時，在腦海里的都是回憶。記憶中有沒有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。請選取一個方面，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝敃r的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。（注意：段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

The following is for reference only(以下表達僅供參考）

used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Yesterday once more

It goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.

I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person.

In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)注意選取一個給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝敃r的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。