Question

【題目】短文改錯

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

注意：1. 每句不超過兩處錯誤；

2. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

3. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Swimming is very popular on summer. People likes swimming because water makes them to feel cool. If you like swimming and swim in a right place, it may not dangerous. Last year, more than ten people die because they weren’t carefully in the river near our city. Most of them were student. They often thought they could swim very good and nothing could happen to they, but they were wrong. Please look after ourselves and loving our life.

Answer 1

【答案】Swimming is very popular on summer. People likes swimming because water makes them to

in like

feel cool. If you like swimming and swim in a right place, it may not∧ dangerous. Last year,

be

more than ten people die because they weren’t carefully in the river near our city. Most of

died careful

them were student. They often thought they could swim very good and nothing could happen

students well

to they, but they were wrong. Please look after ourselves and loving our life.

them love

【解析】

本文講述了很多人在夏天喜歡游泳，但是去年十多個人因為粗心，在河里游泳時死去。因此在游泳時要照顧好自己，真愛我們的生命。

第一處錯誤：表示在夏天，用短語in summer，因此把on改為in。

第二處錯誤：主語people是復數形式，故謂語用復數形式，因此把likes改為like。

第三處錯誤：make sb do sth讓某人做某事，因此刪掉them和feel之間的to。

第四處錯誤：位于情態(tài)動詞may not后作謂語，用動詞原形，因此在not和dangerous之間加be。

第五處錯誤：根據last year可知此處用一般過去時，因此把die改為died。

第六處錯誤：作為系動詞weren’t的表語，因此用形容詞，故把carefully改為careful。

第七處錯誤：主語most of them是復數，故此處用復數名詞作表語，因此把student改為students。

第八處錯誤：修飾動詞swim，故用副詞，因此把good改為well。

第九處錯誤：作為動詞短語happen to的賓語，故用賓格形式，因此把they改為them。

第十處錯誤：此處是祈使句，故謂語用動詞原形，因此把loving改為love。