Question

19．假如你名叫He Cong，在即將畢業(yè)之際，你的英語老師Mr．Smith要求你們每人給他寫一封英文書信作紀(jì)念．   
    要點(diǎn)提示：
 1．對(duì)Mr．Smith的印象：總是工作努力：有困難時(shí)盡力幫助我們．
    2．簡(jiǎn)述一次經(jīng)歷：你開始學(xué)英語時(shí)無論如何努力都學(xué)不好；在你幾乎要放棄時(shí)，他發(fā)現(xiàn)了你的問題；他與你進(jìn)行了一次如何學(xué)英語的談話；他從此不斷幫助你；你對(duì)英語感興趣了；你現(xiàn)在英語學(xué)得好．'
    3．你的感受：很幸運(yùn)作他的學(xué)生．
    要求：
    1．詞數(shù)：l00左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
    2．所有的要點(diǎn)提示必須涉及，可適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容．
    3．字跡工整，卷面整潔，語言流暢．
    4．不得用真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名．     
    參考詞語：try to help，have atalk，do well in，luck
Dear Mr．Smith，
How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soonBut I really want to say thank you very much．And I won't forget you．You are a handsome，friendly and clever teacher．You are always hard-working and strict．When we have problems，you usually help us at once．
I still remember you tried to help me，when I started to learn english．I really thought it very difficult．And I tried a lot，but I couldn't get good grade．So I decided to give it up．At this time，you had a talk with me about how to learn English．Since then you helped me all the time．And I began to take interest in english．Now，I do well in English．So I feel very lucky to be your student．I have learned a lot from you．For example，I will help others when they are in trouble．
Best wishes to you!
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給出寫作要點(diǎn)的提綱作文．內(nèi)容為在畢業(yè)之際給老師的一封信，寫作要點(diǎn)是 1．對(duì)Mr．Smith的印象． 2．簡(jiǎn)述一次經(jīng)歷3．你的感受，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱和第二人稱．
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語：hard-working勤奮的，try to do sth盡力去做某事，give up放棄，all the time一直，take interest in對(duì)…感興趣等等

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon．But I really want to say thank you very much．And I won't forget you．You are a handsome，friendly and clever teacher．You are always hard-working and strict．When we have problems，you usually help us at once．（對(duì)Mr．Smith的印象）
I still remember you tried to help me，when I started to learn english．I really thought it very difficult．And I tried a lot，but I couldn't get good grade．So I decided to give it up．．（高分句型）At this time，you had a talk with me about how to learn English．Since then you helped me all the time．And I began to take interest in english．Now，I do well in English．（簡(jiǎn)述一次經(jīng)歷）  So I feel very lucky to be your student．I have learned a lot from you．For example，（高分句型）I will help others when they are in trouble．（我的感受）
Best wishes to you!
Yours
He Cong

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給出寫作要點(diǎn)的提綱類作文．考生需根據(jù)所給題目及要點(diǎn)展開作文．可先從最基本的詞匯入手，然后組詞成句，考生需特別注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，使文章看起來?xiàng)l理更清晰，語句更連貫