Question

【題目】書面表達。

老人跌倒該不該扶，敢不敢扶，一度成為社會熱點。針對這一話題，人們做了一個調(diào)查。下面是調(diào)查結(jié)果，請你據(jù)此寫一篇文章。

內(nèi)容要點：

1. 調(diào)查結(jié)果是什么？

2. 你認為是否該去幫助跌倒老人, 請說明原因。 如果該幫助，那你會怎么幫？

3. 號召大家對需要幫助的人施以援手。

要求：

不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。

字數(shù)80字左右，文章開頭已給出。

We did a survey about whether we should help the old when they fall down, and here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

We did a survey about whether we should help the old when they fall down, and here are the results.Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old, while 42% of people refuse to help the old ，also there are some people who say it’s not easy to say.In my opinion, we should help the old people , because we all have parents, and we will grow old one day. If all of us are not willing to give our hands, how can we ask others to help ourselves?

So I strongly call on people to show your love to the old, not only for others but also for ourselves.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文是以話題老人跌倒該不該扶，敢不敢扶為主題，題目以圖畫提供數(shù)據(jù)，通過細心觀察圖中的數(shù)字，表示不同人的觀點，寫作時要合理使用信息，弄清寫作的意圖，通過分析思考把握邏輯聯(lián)系，找出主題并借助所給的文字，把圖中的信息轉(zhuǎn)化成文章。在表述自己的觀點時，要合理并寫出理由，最后要給出建議。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如:Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old, while 42% of people refuse to help the old ，also there are some people who say it’s not easy to say。使用到了連詞while以及定語從句。 If all of us are not willing to give our hands, how can we ask others to help ourselves?條件狀語從句。In my opinion,call on ， not only for others but also for ourselves.等等。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.